Features of a Biography
Today I can spot the features that make a biography sound formal and true.
A Look back3 min
- 1.
Which word is a contraction of 'they are'?
they'retheirtheretheyre - 2.
Read: “We swim in the calm river by the bridge.” Write each word in the right column, as it is used in this sentence.
riverswimcalmbridgeNoun Verb Adjective - 3.
Which sentence puts the inverted commas in the right place?
“Come here,” said Mum.“Come here”, said Mum.Come here,” said Mum.
B Watch me, then you4 min
This is the start of a made-up biography about Ruth Hale, an engineer. Look at the timeline, then read the lines.
Ruth Hale was born in Leeds in 1890.
In 1912, she won a prize for her work on rivers.
Her bridge over the river was opened in 1930.
- 1.
Which sentence is written in a formal tone?
Ruth was, like, the best engineer ever!Ruth became a respected engineer after her studies in Leeds.Ruth was honestly super clever with bridges. - 2.
Write one sentence about Ruth's bridge. Start it with 'In 1930,' and use third person.
C Your turn8 min
Each row checks one feature of a biography. Read the sentences and answer carefully.

- 1.
Which word is a third person pronoun?
Iyoushewe - 2.
Which sentence has a formal tone?
Anil was a clever engineer who designed roads.Anil was, like, totally brilliant at roads!Anil was so cool with roads, honestly. - 3.
Which sentence starts with a fronted adverbial followed by a comma?
In 1921 Anil moved to Bristol.In 1921, Anil moved to Bristol.Anil moved, in 1921, to Bristol. - 4.
Join these two sentences with a relative clause using 'who' or 'which'. Write one sentence.
Say it out loud: Which feature did you spot first, the pronoun, the tone or the comma? Why did that one stand out?
D Spot the mistake3 min

- 1.
Which two words make the sentence informal, so Kit is wrong?
E Think deeper4 min
Ruth learned to sail as a child. She sold lemonade at a summer fair. She won a prize in 1912 and opened her bridge in 1930.

- 1.
A biography cannot include everything. Which small moment would you leave out, and why? Write one sentence.
How did it feel?2 min
Which feature of a biography was hardest to spot today? Tell your grown-up why.